Learning Curve ([info]dragon_charmer) wrote,
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Fic ... Maybe Baby - Part Nine (H/D, mpreg)

Finally, here is the last bit of Maybe Baby. Who would have ever thought I’d end up writing mpreg ... whatever next? Rentboy!Draco? Cross-Dressing!Harry?

I had hoped to have this part finished earlier this week, but I ended up writing a version which I decided didn’t really fit in with the fluffiness of the rest of the story (dead!Harry, Draco left having to deal with a baby he isn’t sure he wants, etc etc ... you get the picture). So, instead here is a nice fluffy part 9. I might one day post the angsty other version, but not at the minute.

This is for everyone who has commented on the previous eight parts. I am still amazed by how popular this story seems to have been. I’m sorry I haven’t replied to your lovely posts, but I have read and enjoyed every one of them. Thank You.

Please remember that this is a mpreg story.

Part one ... Part two ... Part three ... Part four ... Part five ... Part six ... Part seven ... Part eight

Maybe Baby ... part 9

“Can I get you anything, Mr Malfoy?

Draco looked up from his chair in the corner of the room and managed a tired smile at the nurse. “No thanks. I’m fine.”

She gave a nod. “Well, you know where to find me. I’ll leave baby’s feed just in case he wakes up. Can you remember the spell to warm it up?”

“Yes ... just about.” He mentally totted up the number of times he’d said the spell over the last thirty hours and decided that he’d never realised just how time consuming babies could be. When they weren’t being fed they needed changing and when they weren’t sleeping they cried until you picked them up and paced the floor.

As the nurse quietly closed the door behind her, he stared at the cot where the tiny baby (were all babies that small?) gave a little mew. He stiffened reflexively, waiting for the sound to develop into a howl and then a scream, but instead the child settled, suckling at his fist.

Draco rubbed at his eyes and let out a tired sigh. He hadn’t sleep in nearly two days now and he was desperate for a shower and a change of clothes. People kept telling him to go home and rest, but how could he leave with Harry still unconscious and a baby to look after. His eyes flickered from the cot to the bed where Harry lay and back to the cot again. It would be weeks before Harry would be well enough to look after his son and Draco wasn’t sure he could cope with both a new baby and a sick husband.

He let his head drop against the back of the chair, the sound of his own breathing matching Harry’s while the baby continued to make little noises. Maybe if he just closed his eyes for a minute....

---

Draco came too with a jolt and realised that the sound was someone hissing in pain. Harry was sitting on the edge of his bed, one arm cradling his stomach and a determined look on his face, which was fixed on the cot.

He managed to get out of his seat before Harry got to his feet. “Harry ... no ... you mustn’t get up.” His hands reached for Harry’s shoulders, gently pushing him back down. “Come on.”

Briefly Harry protested, but finally allowed Draco to put him back to bed. “The baby....” His voice was a whisper and he clutched at Draco’s arm.

“He’s just fine,” Draco quickly whispered back as he pushed his fingers through Harry’s hair. “Just fine.” He studied the other man’s face before leaning forward to briefly brush his lips against Harry’s.

“Can I see him?”

“Of course.” Draco kissed him again, sinking into the embrace as Harry’s arms snaked around him, holding him close. “God, I’ve been so worried.” The stress of the last two days finally hit home and he had to struggle not to cry or shout or scream. He wanted to hold onto Harry and never let go ever again. “I thought I was going to lose you.”

“Shhhhh.” Harry petted and stroked as Draco trembled, fighting back tears. “As if you could get rid of me that easily.”

Draco finally pulled away, but his fingers continued to touch Harry, as if only by doing so could he prove to himself that Harry was really alive. “What the bloody hell were you playing at, Harry?”

“The baby? Please, Draco.”

With a nod Draco came to his feet and quickly crossed to the cot. The baby was fast asleep and he debated for a moment about waking his son, but Harry had sounded so desperate. Carefully he pulled back the covers and lifted the child into his arms. He was still a little nervous about holding the baby, but Hermione had shown him how to and when he returned to the bed, he carefully whispered instructions to Harry.

As Harry cradled the baby in the crook of his arm, Draco climbed onto the bed next to him, watching the awed expression on Harry’s face. “One of the nurses said we should call him ‘Milagro’.” At Harry’s raised eyebrow, Draco smiled. “Apparently it’s Spanish for ‘Miracle’.”

“Well, he certainly is that ... our miracle. What happened?”

“I was going to ask you the same thing.” Draco shifted closer, pushing his arm around Harry’s shoulders. “Weasley found you in the garden.”

“Ron? He came to the house?”

“Mmmm. Apparently he wanted to apologise.”

“Oh right.” Harry frowned thoughtfully. “I miss him, you know.”

“I know you do. I expect he’ll be by later.”

“Good. He could be Snitch’s godfather.”

Draco raised an indignant eyebrow. He was too tired to get into an argument about godfathers now, but he would need some persuading to agree to Weasel being his son’s godfather. “Why were you out in the garden without a coat?”

“I went out because the birds’ water was frozen. I think I slipped and then everything hurt so much and I couldn’t get up again. Then everything went blank.”

“You were soaked through when Weasley found you and blue with the cold. Then they found out you had internal bleeding, but they couldn’t do anything because of the baby. Lizzie couldn’t Apparate the baby because of the bleeding and she wasn’t sure if they opened you up whether they could stop the bleeding and I thought I was going to loose you.” Draco nuzzled into Harry’s hair remembering how he’d pleaded with Lizzie to save Harry ... that he didn’t care about anything else but Harry. “In the end they decided to operate, but you’d lost a lot of blood and it was touch and go for about twelve hours. Of course, once the baby was born they could give you potions to stop the bleeding, but they couldn’t use them until then.”

“Is that why my stomach hurts so much?”

Draco nodded even though Harry couldn’t see him. “From the operation. You shouldn’t have tried to get up.”

“I know. When I woke up I realised the baby was gone and I panicked. I thought for a moment that I’d lost him. Then I saw the cot and I needed to check.” Harry gently touched the baby’s cheek with his fingertip. “I needed to know.” Then with a crooked grin, he smiled up at Draco. “I think he looks like you.”

Draco gave a snort. “With all that black hair, I doubt it very much. I bet he’s going to have green eyes as well.”

“Have you seen them yet ... his eyes?”

“Yes, they look grey/blue at the moment. Lizzie said it might be six months before the colour settles.”

The baby struggled a little, one fist waving in the air as his eyes opened. He stared at Harry and blinked before screwing his face up and letting out a cry. “Is he okay?”

“Probably hungry ... he’s always hungry.”

“Can I feed him?”

Draco nodded. Collecting the bottle, he warmed it up and helped Harry to get comfortable. “Are you okay?”

“I’m fine.”

“Let me know if it gets too much. You’re supposed to be resting.” He watched, enraptured by the expression on Harry’s face.

“Just let me do this.” Harry smiled at him. “Then I’ll rest.

“Hermione asked what we were going to call him. I told her not to be nosy.”

Harry chuckled. “I thought you wanted to call him Milagro?”

“No way.”

“Well, he’s not an Aaron or a Daniel.”

“And I refuse to have a child called Leo ... that’s just too Gryffindor for me.” Draco watched as Harry pouted. “What about Joshua?”

“Yes ... I like that ... Joshua Malfoy.”

Draco opened his mouth in surprise. “I thought you wanted to call him Potter.”

“Well, I know how important your family name is to you, and there is no way I’m going to saddle him with a hyphenated name. Can you just imagine what it would be like for him when he gets to Hogwarts? Snape shouting out ‘Potter-Malfoy, just what potion are you trying to make this time?’ No ... he can be a Malfoy. And he can have Potter as a middle name, just to remind him.”

Draco swallowed, desperate to say something but unable to find the words. Instead he leaned over and kissed Harry. “Thank you.” The words were a whispered hiss.

“Can you imagine it, Joshua,” Harry directed his comments at the baby, “the look on your daddy’s face when you become the first Malfoy to ever be Sorted into Gryffindor?” He looked up, meeting Draco’s expression with an evil grin.

Before Draco had chance to response, he noticed a flicker of pain in Harry’s green eyes. “Come on, let me take him.”

Harry nodded and carefully handed the precious bundle to his husband. “When can we go home?”

“Soon,” Draco cradled the child in his arms and began the familiar pacing. “You need to get your strength back.

“I want to be home for Christmas ... Joshua’s first Christmas.” Harry sighed, letting out a yawn as he settled back on the bed, eyes suddenly heavy with fatigue.

“We’ll see.” Draco reached out to brush a finger over Harry’s cheek as the other man’s eyelids drooped and finally closed. He watched as the pain and fatigue slowly left Harry’s face, replaced by the peace of sleep. “We both want daddy home, don’t we, Joshua?”

He sat back down in the chair and, resting Joshua against his shoulder, he began rubbing gentle circles on the baby’s back as he hummed a tune his mother used to sing to him.

---fin
Tags: h/d, mpreg

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[info]fierydspsition

August 18 2005, 22:10:27 UTC 6 years ago

Oh this is fabulous! I must be honest and say I'm not sure if I could have handled an angsty ending - I'd much rather have the fluff. I also think that you portrayed Draco very well - concerned and caring while still being masculine and still very... Draco. ::smiles::

[info]pinguthegreek

August 18 2005, 22:12:17 UTC 6 years ago

You amaze me.

[info]aux

August 18 2005, 22:16:11 UTC 6 years ago

I haven't read your mpreg fic - I'm sorry but it's really not my mug of chai, but whatever next? Rentboy!Draco? Cross-Dressing!Harry? *parks chair in the front row* :O

[info]zooey_glass04

August 19 2005, 07:12:47 UTC 6 years ago

Ha ha, I'd try it if I were you. It's amazing how many people have commented saying they never read mpreg but this dragged them in! Personally, I still like the first chapter the best - read that as a one-shot and see if you're drawn to continue.

[info]meredyth_13

August 18 2005, 22:27:49 UTC 6 years ago

Alright... I'm blaming my hormones on the fact that I'm wibbling here! I'm not sniffing over mpreg... not even fluffy gorgeous sooky mpreg. In fact, I was never here, you never saw me, and this comment definitely didn't get written! *winks*

But next? Res11 would be top of my list, but only because I need to know...

*sends thank you hug, and sniffs again*

[info]aidenfire

August 18 2005, 22:37:23 UTC 6 years ago

Aww, this was adorable. Much, much love.

[info]snottygrrl

August 18 2005, 22:44:52 UTC 6 years ago

am beyond glad you opted for this ending. have had more than enough fictional death for the week. am curious about the other ending though, so do encourage you to let us see it sometime.

as for this chapter? [*happy sigh*] beautiful. not too fluffy (i mean let's face it, as happy as draco is to have harry back, he seems a little less than thrilled with his current sitution. it ain't all peaches and cream and bliss), not too angsty. brill description of draco trying to cope and harry being harry and all v. v. nice.

“Can you imagine it, Joshua,” Harry directed his comments at the baby, “the look on your daddy’s face when you become the first Malfoy to ever be Sorted into Gryffindor?”

perfect. ♥

(((big hugs)))

[info]snottygrrl

August 18 2005, 22:46:00 UTC 6 years ago

oh and rentboy!draco? i'm there. [*snicker*]

[info]misscake

August 18 2005, 23:01:53 UTC 6 years ago

Oh! What a suitable adorable schmoopy ending. I adore it, even if you didn't pick my son's name. :D This was fun. Makes me wish for the 40 days of Christmas again. *looks at calendar* OH! we aren't that far off now...

[info]sullacat

August 18 2005, 23:02:39 UTC 6 years ago

*squees with joy*

Thanks for all the effort. Your fangirls are uberhappy!

*hugs Joshua*

[info]nmalfoy

August 18 2005, 23:13:41 UTC 6 years ago

You know... I started reading slash because of you (Resolution) and I'd never read it before. Similarly, I've never read mpreg before until this. Oh, Fran, you lead me on the wicked paths of your imagination. I demand rentboy!Draco to assuage the pain. *grin* I really did like this. Joshua. I like that name!

[info]dragynville

August 18 2005, 23:26:19 UTC 6 years ago

Lovely fic, very fitting end.

[info]tati71

August 18 2005, 23:36:10 UTC 6 years ago

It's a lovely ending^^ Such a cute story,cute parents and cute baby...and I'm not sure I want to see the angsty version^^;;
*hugs*

[info]hergunfight

August 18 2005, 23:49:40 UTC 6 years ago

wonderful ending, i would love it if you wrote more to this, an in the future fic, but i just loooved this very very much :-D

[info]primroseburrows

August 18 2005, 23:51:38 UTC 6 years ago

Much as I'd love to see "Maybe Baby: The Terrible Twos", this is perfect just as it is. *loves*

[info]elethoniel

August 18 2005, 23:52:35 UTC 6 years ago

Oh this has just been so much fun to read. I adore the name discussion ^_^ Totally cute. And Joshua is perfect! ♥

I've loved reading this so much. It never fails to put a smile on my face.
Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful mpreg and not loosing sight of the most important things about pregnancy. This was just such a joy to read, thank you so so much.

♥♥♥
xXxXx

[info]souls_tamer

August 19 2005, 00:12:59 UTC 6 years ago

NOOOOO... It can't be over. That was absolutely lovely. You should definatly write something about Joshua when he's grown up... see if he really is the first Malfoy to ever be sorted into Griffindor.

[info]lusiology

August 19 2005, 01:13:49 UTC 6 years ago

Or Hufflepuff!

[info]taziamalfoy

August 19 2005, 00:35:45 UTC 6 years ago

I don't know what to say. I normally avoid mpreg like the plague, most of it just makes me hurl, but this was fantastic. I loved every part of it. I've just recently had another baby, my third, and I can remember talking to him like Harry and Draco did. And I have to admit to squeeing when I read that they named him Joshua because that's what I named my baby. And calling the baby Snitch before he was born was priceless, it was a very Harry thing to do. I'm most definitely going to read this again. And again. And again.

[info]february_sea

August 19 2005, 00:40:23 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, this has just made me SO happy. :) Thank you, love.

[info]cherrysyllabub

August 19 2005, 00:49:13 UTC 6 years ago

This was very nice, thanks for writing it. I'm so glad Harry didn't die, the baby is okay, and Ron and Harry are going to make up.

[info]lusiology

August 19 2005, 01:13:14 UTC 6 years ago

I'm sorry Harry & Draco's journey from being a couple to being a family is over because I've enjoyed reading this well written mpreg. I tried to read one the other day but when it mentioned the baby feeding off draco's nipple I knew it was time to bail out. So, bravo and I'm looking forward to rent boy Draco. :)

[info]dairygirl

August 19 2005, 02:00:38 UTC 6 years ago

I enjoyed this from beginning to end. Thanks for this bit of story and loved the worried Father Draco at the end. A happy ending is nice.

[info]coffeejunkii

August 19 2005, 02:23:23 UTC 6 years ago

i'm very glad you didn't go through with the more angsty option. it's not like this one is saccharine, either. i think it's the perfect ending for this story, to be honest. too bad it's over now!

[info]__mintyfresh

August 19 2005, 03:04:37 UTC 6 years ago

I love the way you ended this. I am such a sucker for fluff. You made mpreg very enjoyable and really, that's not easy to do.

Although that angsty bit does sound interesting. Heartbreaking but very interesting.

[info]delicatetruth

August 19 2005, 03:29:56 UTC 6 years ago

Very nice ending, angst is all well and good but I must have happy endings. Especially for little snitch.

I liked how you handled Draco's worry as well. And a Malfoy in Gryffindor *snickers*.

[info]eireinn

August 19 2005, 03:34:25 UTC 6 years ago

What a lovely end to a lovely story!

And I greatly approve of your choice of baby names. I do like Joshua. :)

[info]star_dancer54

August 19 2005, 03:46:44 UTC 6 years ago

*croons happily* This was... sweet. a bit nerve-wracking for a second there... Joshua? Interesting choice.
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